Script Annotation
I give actionable, accountable feedback.
no scores. no percentiles. no bullshit.
This isn’t coverage. This is line-by-line analysis of your screenplay. Its characters, structure, craft, format and grammar.
With your annotated draft in hand, we discuss your notes and strategy as you polish the next draft.
I use Acrobat Pro to markup so I recommend Adobe’s free Acrobat Reader for best review results.
What’s with all the colours?
Story
Character,
Tone,Voice,
Themes…
General
Questions, Issues,Logic, Grammar…
Production
Budget,Scope,
Casting,VFX…
Tune Up
Clunky phrasing or parlance…
Offers
Suggestions,
Punch Ups…
Cuts
Recommended
cutting,
Redundant
words…
What does an annotated draft look like?
“After 10+ years in the business, they were some of the best, genuinely helpful notes, I've ever been given.”
“…Thanks for taking the time. I’ll certainly take your notes into account on the next draft -as I enjoyed them and like how they challenge me to think of things in a different light.”
“You are a fantastic script editor.”
“…this kind of feedback is great for me, thank you. You took the time to write with fantastic suggestions and ideas all over and I truly appreciate it.”
“Greg’s notes were excellent, covering everything from typos and grammar to story, characters, structure…
He also provided great follow-up, answering questions and looking over new versions of…key scenes.
…I'll be using him on all my future projects.”
“…myself and the EP think your feedback is very good and bang on to be honest.”
“I've used various script coverage sites and also had some feedback from competitions, but none of them even live up to Greg's feedback.”